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(cont) is beautifully evoked by the repetition of lines about natural elements with an underlying urgency.

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Midnight Visit- the pantoum structure works so well with your choice of words to create the eerie atmosphere. Interesting that the visit has remained in your memory all this time.

I think Ann’s reflection on the eeriness at Hanging Rock

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Thank you for your comments, Leanne. Ann and I value feedback.

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